It was the same dream as yesterday, as Daemon woke up in a pool of sweat, his brain did a quick flash of what happened. And shuddered his body in horror, in his dream, thousands and thousands of bugs were eating him, seriously? He had talked to his Doctor about this, and he said it's a over stress caused by tiredness or whatever, but it has been happening for days and days now, he really wanted to end this, but he didn't know how to, he prayed, did everything he could, but he could not end this, then it hit him: I didn't try to fight them before, so this might work, I should maybe try this. Daemon, now really crazy to end this, goes to his bed early, As he fell asleep, same scene opened his sight, foggy sky, grassy + muddy land, and thousands of bugs charging at him, and then.........
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Do you want to become a psychologist? :) Your story was unique from other students because yours deals with a single character fighting his own psychological symptom. However, you could have written more, especially the three endings. You could have elaborated more on anxiety, fear, and stress the main character feels from the horrible dream.
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